[CLUE-Admin] Membership wording for CLUE site

[Jed S. Baer]

On Sun, 29 Feb 2004 10:28:19 -0700
David Anselmi <anselmi at anselmi.us> wrote:

> > CLUE offers annual memberships for $20/yr. In return for your support,
> > we offer benefits, such as eligibility for door prizes at meetings, a
> > CLUE e-mail address, and a CLUE home page. For more details, check out
> > <a href="membership.html">membership page</a>.
> 
> I'd say "CLUE web page" rather than "home page".  But maybe our 
> marketing dept would disagree (what does Joe Sixpack call it?)

Perhaps "web site"?

> > Whether you are new to Linux, a Linux expert, or just interested in
> > Linux, please join us at our next meeting. If you cannot attend the
> > monthly meetings, we also host frequent <a>
> > href="installfest.html">Installfests</a>
> [...]
> 
> Heh, frequent.  Now that's spin.  Did you ever work for a politician?
> ;-)

Aaaack! I think I might last a week working for a politician. Maybe we
should say "ocassional", or just drop the adjective altogether.

jed
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